Feedback We Were Given

We had to show out media class our horror film pitch, we then got given feed back from our teacher and from out class.

Overall, everyone who gave feedback said that they really liked the idea that we had and they all said that the idea of the illustration dissolving into the real-life scene was very interesting. They also thought that the idea of having the two girls was different and it would be very cool to see the transition.

However, we also got feedback telling us to be very careful with the girls we chose to play us when we were little because they should look similar to the older characters in the opening of the horror film. Our teacher told us that we should use a plastic knife instead of a real one because we could get in trouble with the police since we are going to be chased and we will be filming in a park which might look very suspicious. They were all scared that the illustration in the book wouldn't look like the real-life, however we made sure that they all knew that a lake near my house looks familiar to the lake in the book.